This is the original version of Episode 2 of the comic. Note that compared to the one I ended up going for, the top three panels are a lot brighter. Too bright for my liking as it turns out.
This is what happens when you have too much time to second guess yourself.
Considering this is an activity George Lucas is clearly mired up to the chest of his flannel shirt in, I choose to call this kind of self editing ‘Lucasing’ (or maybe ‘Lucasing about’). Let’s see if we can’t get that into some kind of online dictionary (if it isn’t already).